From c8b29c62eb4ca23340ae863c488b7e8182cbae22 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Benny Baumann <BenBE@geshi.org>
Date: Tue, 10 Dec 2013 22:35:40 +0100
Subject: bug 1229: Do some minor rewording

---
 pages/index/1.php | 6 +++---
 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)

(limited to 'pages/index')

diff --git a/pages/index/1.php b/pages/index/1.php
index 80d13ca..78141fc 100644
--- a/pages/index/1.php
+++ b/pages/index/1.php
@@ -18,9 +18,9 @@
 <p><?=_("By joining CAcert and becoming a Member, you agree to the CAcert Community Agreement. Please take a moment now to read that and agree to it; this will be required to complete the process of joining.")?></p>
 <p><?=_("Warning! This site requires cookies to be enabled to ensure your privacy and security. This site uses session cookies to store temporary values to prevent people from copying and pasting the session ID to someone else exposing their account, personal details and identity theft as a result.")?></p>
 <p style="border:dotted 1px #900;padding:0.3em;background-color:#ffe;">
-<b><?=_("Note: Please enter your birthdate and names as they are written in your official documents.")?></b><br><br>
-<?=_("While CAcert is a CA people relay on us knowing about the identity of the users of our certificates. So even as we value privacy of high, we need to collect at least some informations about our members. This is especially the case for everybody who wants to partake an our web of trust.")?>
-<?=_("Your private informations will only be used for internal procedures and will not be shared with third parties.")?>
+<b><?=_("Note: Please enter your date of birth and names as they are written in your official documents.")?></b><br /><br />
+<?=_("Because CAcert is a CA people relay on us knowing about the identity of the users of our certificates. So even as we value privacy very much, we need to collect at least some basic informations about our members. This is especially the case for everybody who wants to take part in our web of trust.")?>
+<?=_("Your private informations will be used for internal procedures only and will not be shared with third parties.")?>
 </p>
 <p style="border:dotted 1px #900;padding:0.3em;background-color:#ffe;">
 <?=_("A proper password wouldn't match your name or email at all, it contains at least 1 lower case letter, 1 upper case letter, a number, white space and a misc symbol. You get additional security for being over 15 characters and a second additional point for having it over 30. The system starts reducing security if you include any section of your name, or password or email address or if it matches a word from the english dictionary...")?><br><br>
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